Wrote some words late at night while on my way back home from college..
Dreary eyed, I emerge
From a red - deathly day
It should have been peace and dark.
But there is still life on the way.
“Take it Easy ”, the heart wants to say..
Mind says – “No time to waste.
Don’t you see the life on the way”
Allowing the air to take me under its wing..
In my ears, the noise scatters..
And then Nothing Else Matters....
8 comments:
what a new perspective u have given to life on road.........the depth of it is abysmal.....
thank u phaaji..glad u understood ;)
:))))))
Now you understand the life of a city that never sleeps.
Have you ever tried to catch the last train from churchgate? Do that once even if it is for fun.
I liked the last para the most. Keep posting.
@cuckoo: Thanks!!
Caught a train from churchgate some 7 years ago... but not this time.. though have caught one from dadar (and more than managed to get down at Vile Parle :) )
we have been planning to visit gateway, marine drive etc.. guess then will have a taste of churchgate too...
Awesome words!!!! Maaza aagaya oye....
There is this feeling when everything around is quiet but there is this power struggle inside, and one can hear a sort of hastiness in the mind...dunno if its the same but easy relating to it....i generally like poetry that is alot more symbolic but enjoyed this one...
@amrut: thanks dude!!
@alesea: glad that you liked it.. and poetry is always the way u perceive it..it can never have only 1 meaning..
@sid
poetry is always the way u perceive it...hahaha
tabhi CAT mein watt lagti hain
A bhi thik,
B bhi thik,
saala C bhi thik,
& D All of Above......yehin hain...
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